Isn’t there anything else to ask?
The radio’s talking again
Yet while searching my brainwaves
I stumbled on answers
Dancing in circles
Jubilant fool
More questions
In floods
Drowned
–
(9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1)
Isn’t there anything else to ask?
The radio’s talking again
Yet while searching my brainwaves
I stumbled on answers
Dancing in circles
Jubilant fool
More questions
In floods
Drowned
–
(9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1)
The World News
Philippa Mitchell Artist
The Art and Music of R. S. Perry
An art blog from Arcturus' Captain
Digital Media and Animation Student -Freshman- @ Alfred State
Inside the Creative Mind of Brittany Semplonius
Stories in words and pictures
For the love of all things Uniquely Artistic...
The Official Blog of St. Josephs College of Commerce
Honoring the life-path
Affordable Art and Framing
The greatest WordPress.com site in all the land!
Words from the Heart
photography, poetry and ponderings of life
Internationally Published Poet
I make art everyday. I love clay, watercolor and sewing.
My Artistic Meanderings
Online Studio
painting what's trending in my own world
Art Student and Computational Linguist
Celebrating the Healing Beauty of Nature
Welcome to my blog and take a "happy time break"! Enjoy a few pieces of my art and photography and also pick up some tips to eat and live healthy!!
The leading book seller in Peasedown St. John
Amazing Art that Everyone can Enjoy!
Writing, the Universe and whatever occurs to me
The Bipolar Writer and J.E. Skye
Alistair Lane - Writer, Poet, Daydreamer
words and scribble.
Short Reads for Busy People
because the story must be told
writer
"free-verse" poetry from the soul
Celebrating Nature and Magic for Kids of all Ages
Celebrating food and all the joy that comes from creating and eating it.
artist and and and...
Oil Painting, Traditional Chinese Painting, Chinese Calligraphy
an end to creative incubation
Things I learn from the dark
30 Paintings in 30 Days
Hello, I am the REAL Peter. This my official WP account.
Just another WordPress.com site
Artist
Underground Circuit is an art and design blog dedicated to sharing ideas and connecting artists.
Art doesn't have to be worthy to be worth sharing
She was devoted to the moon. It’s its darkness she found comfort. In its light, she found hope.
This is sad, deep (if you get the pun), but touching and very well written. Plus, the photo goes well!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks a lot, trying my hand at new forms
LikeLiked by 2 people
I enjoyed reading this from top to bottom then from bottom to top…there is sadness wrapped in words like flood and drown and in the image…this brings to mind the number of drownings that occur each year along coastal areas where people fish for a living…I know of more than twelve drownings in my life and all of them were people I knew (family, friends and acquaintances )…I love the form of this, Gretl!
LikeLiked by 2 people
Thanks a lot for reading, that’s an interesting interpitation and sorry for your loss. I was thinking more on the struggle with all the things society can want us to be, drowning in a wave of expectation as people form unrealistic expectations of us and were that leaves us as a result.
LikeLiked by 1 person
You are welcome and thanks for the sentiments…yes, indeed, society does make it difficult for us to stay afloat sometimes…
LikeLiked by 1 person
I like your approach. Nice Nonet…
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks a lot
LikeLiked by 1 person
Damn! I misspoke…Nonets are 10-9-8-7-6-5-4-3-2-1
LikeLiked by 2 people
As far as i’m aware it counts down from nine.
LikeLike
You’re right. My head isn’t working today
LikeLiked by 1 person
I thought of fall of icarus while reading this.
LikeLiked by 1 person
I love the nonet form as well as Fibonacci–have you done that one? Great work.
LikeLiked by 1 person
Thanks for reading and commenting. I’m quite new to poetry, yet to try the Fibonacci but I shall be experimenting with it at one point im sure☺
LikeLike
Good–it’s fun!
LikeLike